Paul P

Hello !
My name's Paul Pointeau, I'm 16 years ago. I've Brown eyes, and hair of the same colour. I have two brothers, one of them has 19 years ago, and the other has 11 years ago. I have a dog, her name is Chiera, her is husky, a race of dog of snow.
I live in Saint Jean de Linières, a small village next to Angers.
I study in the Jean Moulin highschool, where I study Maths, englih, spanish, and others subjects… But I prefer the maths, and sport. Everyday, I take the tramway to go to my highschool.
In my free time, I act in a theater club. I like practising rollerblading. I like reading mangas, comics, and I like playing videogames. I Learn the violin and I play piano.

CORRECTED TEXT

Hello !
My name's Paul Pointeau, I'm 16 years ago. I've brown eyes, and hair of the same colour. I have two brothers, one of them is 19 years ago, and the other is 11 years ago. I have a dog, her name is Chiera, she is a husky, a race of dog of snow snow dog.
I live in Saint Jean de Linières, a small village next to Angers.
I study at the Jean Moulin high school, where I study Maths, English, Spanish, and others subjects… But I prefer the maths, and physical education. Everyday, I take the tramway to go to my high school.
In my free time, I act in a theater club. I like going rollerblading. I like reading mangas, comics, and I like playing videogames. I am learning to play the violin and I play piano.

Paul, please make these corrections and delete what I have written. Thanks!

Grade: 9/20

Comments: still waiting on those corrections….