My self :
Hi, my name is Théo C., I’m 16 years old, I live in Angers, I have got 2 brothers and 1 sister.
I study engineering science, my favorite subject is mathematics.
I love hip-hop, I have been practicing it for 3 years. I like to play football.
My favorite film is “Kung Fu Panda” and the sequel more.
My future :
In the future, I would like to work in aeronautics, to perhaps become a fighter pilot in the Air Force.
As soon I have my “baccalauréat”, I join the Air Force.
Travels :
I already gone to England, Spain and Germany.
CORRECTIONS
My self :
Hi, my name is Théo C. (just first letter of last name, please), I’m 16 years old, I live in Angers, I have got 2 brothers and 1 sister.
I study engineering science, my favorite subject is mathematics.
I love hip-hop, I have been practicing it for 3 years. I like to play football.
My favorite film is “Kung Fu Panda” and the sequel more. I like the sequel even more.
My future :
In the future, I would like to work in aeronautics, to perhaps become a fighter pilot in the Air Force.
As soon I have my “baccalauréat”, I am going to join the Air Force.
Travels :
I have already gone to England, Spain and Germany.
Please make these corrections and delete what I have written. Thanks, Théo!
Grade: 10/20